Just to make the goals public for you I am listing them below. Please respond to this blog and simply state which numbers you need to work on. Please have the first draft in by next Wednesday.
I am very happy to see the progress we are making so far. Keep up the great work.
So, as we have discussed last night, you can be working on the following:
1) Printing off and reading articles (you should have at minimum 10 now)
2) Should have a cover page and table of contents
3) Including 5 articles into your paper as of now (reference and referring to)
4) PPT should be an appendix
5) A webspiration mind-map should be there
6) A sketch should be there with components and materials listed
7) A materials section should be there
8) You should have been making contributions on the blog
9) You should be well over 500 words now (put word total on cover page)
10) Hand this to me by April 1 as a preliminary draft
You can use the following to grade it:
Name: ___________________________________
Class: _______________
Date: _______________
1) ___/10 articles = ____/10
2) Cover page with word total (5) and contents (5) = _____/10
3) 5 articles (2 pts each) = ____/10
4) PPT in appendix exported to word. Yes/No = 0 or 10 / 10
5) Webspiration mind-map. Yes/No = 0 or 10 / 10
6) Sketch included somewhere in paper. Yes/No = 0 or 10 / 10
7) Materials section. 3 pts for title/6 pts for some elaboration/ 10 for a thorough
preliminary job = 0 or 3 or 6 or 10 / 10
8) Have you made contributions to the blog? Yes/No = 0 or 10 / 10
9) 0 words = 0. 100-300 words = 6. 300-500 = 8. 500+ = 10/10. _____/10
10) Handed in on time. Yes/No = 0 or 10 / 10
Total = ______/ 100
Keep this in your research log when finished
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Hi Mr Steve,
ReplyDeleteI didn't start yet, i have finished from reading the articals only.
Glad to see it on my desk today, thank you.
ReplyDeleteSteve
Tonight, April 5, I will ask you to take a look at your paper and fill out the following form while you are looking your paper. Please be as honest as possible and make comments to support your decision(s).
ReplyDeleteIt may take you some time - so please relax and take the time to work on this reflection properly.
Name: _Mohamed Ali Al Khawwar__________________________________
Class: ___2TA____________
Date: ____5-4-09___________
Research Topic: __BlackBerry Storm 9500______________________
SECTION A
1) __11_/10 articles = __10__/10
Title of the articles:
1.GPS Capabilities
2.Blackberry storm coast
3.How blackberry works
4.Espresso Delivery
5.Independent taxi drivers feel hounded
6.Irans war of words over islands condemned
7.Bat-spy plane
8.Sony newest laptops
9.mobilephones
10.computer flash memory
11. Computer speakers
2) Cover page with word total (5) and contents (5) = 5/10
Reflect
3) 5 articles (2 pts each) = __10__/10
Which did you use from above (see rubric 1)
4) PPT in appendix exported to word. Yes/No = 0 or 10 / 10
Was it included in the paper in a professional way? Was is separate? No
5) Webspiration mind-map. Yes/No = 0 or 10 / 10
Did you use webspiration and were you able to include this document in a professional looking way? Did you use a sketch? Reflect? I did a sketch only
6) Sketch included somewhere in paper. Yes/No = 0 or 10 / 10
Reflect
7) Materials section. 3 pts for title/6 pts for some elaboration/ 10 for a thorough
preliminary job = 0 or 3 or 6 or 10 / 10
Reflect
8) Have you made contributions to the blog? Yes/No = 0 or 10 / 10
How many posts (about) did you make. Did you write thoughtful reflections?
9) 0 words = 0. 100-300 words = 6. 300-500 = 8. 500+ = 10/10. __10___/10
Reflect
10) Handed in on time. Yes/No = 0 or 10 / 10
Reflect
Total = __85____/ 100
SECTION B
This is the second semester for research and report writing. You just graded the first draft of your paper for semester two. How do you feel about the grade you gave yourself? What areas should you improve for the second and third drafts?
How do you feel about the quality of the paper you have just handed in?
It’s not professional, but it cover what needed.
How do you feel about the quality of learning and understanding you have been developing about your technology of choice? I understood a lot.
How does this help you link English to Engineering? Engineers are required to do researches, so I have to start learning how to do it.
What do you still wonder, or want to find out about your research topic?
The future improvement.
It may take you some time - so please relax and take the time to work on this reflection properly.
ReplyDeleteName: AMMAR ALSHEHHi
Class: Date: 2TA
Research Topic: USB flash drive
SECTION A
1) 14/10 articles = 10/10
Title of the articles:
1. THE FUTURE OF USB FLASH DRIVES
2. History of USB Flash Drive
3.USB flash drive
4. USB Flash Drive - Advantages and Limits
5. USB flash drive different from above
6. THE CONSEQUENCES (cost) OF RAPID POPULATION GROWTH
7. Center offers accreditation scheme for online educators
8. Sony Cuts Price of PlayStation 2 to $99.99
9. Electrical Engineering and Computer Science
10. Aeronautics and Astronautics
11. How can Technology Help the Environment
12. iPhone Users Rejoice: There's a New Video Site in Town
13. internal combustion engine
14. Materials Science and Engineering
2) Cover page with word total (5) and contents (5) = 10/10
Reflect
3) 5 articles (2 pts each) = 10/10
Which did you use from above (see rubric 1)
4) PPT in appendix exported to word. Yes = 8 or 10 / 10
Yes I include it, but it separate
Was it included in the paper in a professional way? Was is separate?
Really I put it all together but I will do it.
Yes it looks nice and I like it .
5) Webspiration mind-map. Yes/No =9 or 10 / 10
Did you use webspiration and were you able to include this document in a professional looking way? Did you use a sketch? Reflect?
Yes I think its look nice I don’t know if it professional
Yes I use the sketch
6) Sketch included somewhere in paper. Yes/No = 8 or 10 / 10
Reflect
7) Materials section. 3 pts for title/6 pts for some elaboration/ 10 for a thorough
preliminary job = 10 / 10
Reflect
8) Have you made contributions to the blog? Yes/No = 8 or 10 / 10
How many posts (about) did you make. Did you write thoughtful reflections?
Always late so but I do my work.
9) 0 words = 0. 100-300 words = 6. 300-500 = 8. 500+ =.10/10
Reflect
10) Handed in on time. Yes/No = yes or 10 / 10
Reflect
Total = ______/ 100
SECTION B
This is the second semester for research and report writing. You just graded the first draft of your paper for semester two. How do you feel about the grade you gave yourself? What areas should you improve for the second and third drafts?
How do you feel about the quality of the paper you have just handed in?
It not the final draft but I do every thing you did ask for it.
But if you need it good organization I will do it in second draft.
How do you feel about the quality of learning and understanding you have been developing about your technology of choice?
I think I improve my skills that for sure will help me.
How does this help you link English to Engineering?
It help me a lot I no more technical word than before
What do you still wonder, or want to find out about your research topic?
I satisfied what I got
Keep this in your research log when finished
Name: Ahmed Esmaeel
ReplyDeleteClass: 2TA
Date: 5/4/2009
Research Topic: Space Suit
SECTION A
1) 10/10 articles = 10/10
Title of the articles:
1.Equipotental space suit
2.Pressure suit joint analyzer
3.Regenerable non-venting cooler for protective
4.Self-sealing space suit
5.Space suit and membrane pump system therefor
6.space suit pressure stabilizer
7.Space suit protective assembly
8.tempreture control system form space suit
9. Torso sizing ring construction for hard space suit
10. Underwater space suit pressure
2) Cover page with word total (5) and contents (5) = 10/10
Reflect
I put the title for this technology research and I included myself.
3) 5 articles (2 pts each) = 10/10
Which did you use from above (see rubric 1)
Equipotental space suit
Pressure suit joint analyzer
Self-sealing space suit
space suit pressure stabilizer
Regenerable non-venting cooler for protective
4) PPT in appendix exported to word. Yes/No = 0 or 10 / 10
Was it included in the paper in a professional way? Was is separate?
It’s included in the research paper and I separated it.
5) Webspiration mind-map. Yes/No = 0 or 10 / 10
Did you use webspiration and were you able to include this document in a professional looking way? Did you use a sketch? Reflect?
I used webspiration to make readers know about the whole research in one look.
6) Sketch included somewhere in paper. Yes/No = 0 or 10 / 10
Reflect
I drew a space suit in the space and I think it’s clear.
7) Materials section. 3 pts for title/6 pts for some elaboration/ 10 for a thorough
preliminary job = 0 or 3 or 6 or 10 / 10
Reflect
I included these things.
8) Have you made contributions to the blog? Yes/No = 0 or 10 / 10
I had put my comments on the blog, but sometimes not on time.
How many posts (about) did you make. Did you write thoughtful reflections?
10-15
9) 0 words = 0. 100-300 words = 6. 300-500 = 8. 500+ = 10/10. 10/10
Reflect
I wrote more than 500 words.
10) Handed in on time. Yes/No = 0 or 10 / 10
Reflect
I will hand it tomorrow on Sunday 6/4/2009 and I want to be generous with me to give me 5/10
Total = 90/ 100
SECTION B
This is the second semester for research and report writing. You just graded the first draft of your paper for semester two. How do you feel about the grade you gave yourself? What areas should you improve for the second and third drafts?
I think my grade will be from 90-95% and I hope it’s fare and I wish everything is ok.
How do you feel about the quality of the paper you have just handed in?
everything is ok with me, but I’m thinking about dead line.
How do you feel about the quality of learning and understanding you have been developing about your technology of choice?
I feel ok and I’m keen on to know about my research more.
How does this help you link English to Engineering?
There are many materials I must know about in English.
What do you still wonder, or want to find out about your research topic?
I want to find another word with the same meaning.