Tonight, April 5, I will ask you to take a look at your paper and fill out the following form while you are looking your paper. Please be as honest as possible and make comments to support your decision(s).
It may take you some time - so please relax and take the time to work on this reflection properly.
Name: ___________________________________
Class: _______________
Date: _______________
Research Topic: ________________________
SECTION A
1) ___/10 articles = ____/10
Title of the articles:
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
6.
7.
8.
9.
10.
2) Cover page with word total (5) and contents (5) = _____/10
Reflect
3) 5 articles (2 pts each) = ____/10
Which did you use from above (see rubric 1)
4) PPT in appendix exported to word. Yes/No = 0 or 10 / 10
Was it included in the paper in a professional way? Was is separate?
5) Webspiration mind-map. Yes/No = 0 or 10 / 10
Did you use webspiration and were you able to include this document in a professional looking way? Did you use a sketch? Reflect?
6) Sketch included somewhere in paper. Yes/No = 0 or 10 / 10
Reflect
7) Materials section. 3 pts for title/6 pts for some elaboration/ 10 for a thorough
preliminary job = 0 or 3 or 6 or 10 / 10
Reflect
8) Have you made contributions to the blog? Yes/No = 0 or 10 / 10
How many posts (about) did you make. Did you write thoughtful reflections?
9) 0 words = 0. 100-300 words = 6. 300-500 = 8. 500+ = 10/10. _____/10
Reflect
10) Handed in on time. Yes/No = 0 or 10 / 10
Reflect
Total = ______/ 100
SECTION B
This is the second semester for research and report writing. You just graded the first draft of your paper for semester two. How do you feel about the grade you gave yourself? What areas should you improve for the second and third drafts?
How do you feel about the quality of the paper you have just handed in?
How do you feel about the quality of learning and understanding you have been developing about your technology of choice?
How does this help you link English to Engineering?
What do you still wonder, or want to find out about your research topic?
Keep this in your research log when finished
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Tonight, April 5, I will ask you to take a look at your paper and fill out the following form while you are looking your paper. Please be as honest as possible and make comments to support your decision(s).
ReplyDeleteIt may take you some time - so please relax and take the time to work on this reflection properly.
Name: mohammed Almatrooshi
Class: 2TA
Date: April 5
Research Topic: Space Shuttle
SECTION A
1) ___/10 articles = __10__/10
Title of the articles:
1.Cell Phone
2.Mini Laptop
3.Space Shuttle
4.Population growth
5.First dog in space died within hours
6.First Astronauts in space
7.How space shuttle work
8.life aboard the space shuttle
9.space shuttle positioning communication and navigation
10.the space shuttle
11.satellite broadcasting technology for TV programming
2) Cover page with word total (5) and contents (5) = ___10__/10
Reflect it includes the title and my name and what is the title of the report
3) 5 articles (2 pts each) = __9.5__/10
Which did you use from above (see rubric 1)
Number 3,5,6,7,9,10
4) PPT in appendix exported to word. Yes = 0 or 10 / 10
Was it included in the paper in a professional way? Was is separate?
it includes information about the space shuttle , yes it is separate.
5) Webspiration mind-map. Yes = 0 or 10 / 10
Did you use webspiration and were you able to include this document in a professional looking way? Did you use a sketch? Reflect?
I use hand sketch mind-map
It refelects what section is in the research and information and sub -information
6) Sketch included somewhere in paper. Yes = 0 or 10 / 10
Reflect it show how we are thinking and gathering information for the report
7) Materials section. 3 pts for title/6 pts for some elaboration/ 10 for a thorough
preliminary job = 10 / 10
Reflect what are the system consist of and what is the use of each material
8) Have you made contributions to the blog? Yes= 10 / 10
How many posts (about) did you make. Did you write thoughtful reflections?
all of the post that I’m asked to do , my work always on time
9) 8. 500+ = 10/10. ___9.5__/10
Reflect that our writing develop more and more because we read think and write what we think about
10) Handed in on time. Yes = 10 / 10
Reflect you must to be serious in doing your work in order to improve your self
Total = ___99___/ 100
SECTION B
This is the second semester for research and report writing. You just graded the first draft of your paper for semester two. How do you feel about the grade you gave yourself? What areas should you improve for the second and third drafts?
I feel that my writing develop more and more , I need to improve more in the reading
How do you feel about the quality of the paper you have just handed in?
I feel it is good
How do you feel about the quality of learning and understanding you have been developing about your technology of choice?
Very helpful and both of the teachers helps us a lot by using different ways of teaching such as the log and the writing practice
How does this help you link English to Engineering?
It links to engineering because engineers have to write a lot of reports and the aim of this class is improving our writing and English skills
What do you still wonder, or want to find out about your research topic?
About how the astronauts life during the long trip to the space
Keep this in your research log when finished
Name: Abdullah Saleh Ali
ReplyDeleteClass: 2TA
Date: Sunday 5 April 2009
Research Topic: mobile phones
SECTION A
1) 10 /10 articles = 10/10
Title of the articles:
1. History of mobile phones
2. Types of mobile phones
3. Advantages of mobile phones
4. Disadvantages of mobile phones
5. Multimedia Messaging Service
6. Bluetooth
7. Bell Labs
8. iPhone
9. Cell site
10. 3G
2) Cover page with word total (5) and contents (5) = 10/10
Reflect
3) 5 articles (2 pts each) = 10/10
Which did you use from above (see rubric 1)
1. History of mobile phones
2. Types of mobile phones
3. Advantages of mobile phones
4. Disadvantages of mobile phones
7. Bell Labs
8. iPhone
9. Cell site
10. 3G
4) PPT in appendix exported to word. Yes 10 / 10
yes
Was it included in the paper in a professional way? Was is separate?
5) Webspiration mind-map. Yes/No = 0 or 10 / 10
yes
Did you use webspiration and were you able to include this document in a professional looking way? Did you use a sketch? Reflect?
6) Sketch included somewhere in paper. Yes/No = 0 or 10 / 10
yes
Reflect
7) Materials section. 3 pts for title/6 pts for some elaboration/ 10 for a thorough
preliminary job = 0 or 3 or 6 or 10 / 10
Reflect
8) Have you made contributions to the blog? Yes/No = 0 or 10 / 10
yes
How many posts (about) did you make. Did you write thoughtful reflections?
Nearly all of them.Yes
9) 0 words = 0. 100-300 words = 6. 300-500 = 8. 500+ = 10/10. 6/10
Reflect
10) Handed in on time. Yes/No = 0 or 10 / 10
yes
Reflect
Total = 90/ 100
Tonight, April 5, I will ask you to take a look at your paper and fill out the following form while you are looking your paper. Please be as honest as possible and make comments to support your decision(s).
ReplyDeleteIt may take you some time - so please relax and take the time to work on this reflection properly.
Name: Mohammed Hassan Ali
Class:2ta__
Date: _5-4-2009_
Research Topic: ___________A380_____________
SECTION A
1) _10__/10 articles = __10__/10
Title of the articles:
1.atlantis
2.big bin
3. education_in_the_UAE_in_the_past_and_present
4. enzo
5. Facts About Luxury Cars6.
7. san siro stadium
8. search engine
9. spiderman
10. William_Shakespeare
2) Cover page with word total (5) and contents (5) = __10___/10
Reflect
3) 5 articles (2 pts each) = _10___/10
Which did you use from above (see rubric 1)
4) PPT in appendix exported to word. Yes/No = 0 or 10 / 10 yes
Was it included in the paper in a professional way? Was is separate?
yes yes
5) Webspiration mind-map. Yes/No = 0 or 10 / 10
yes
Did you use webspiration and were you able to include this document in a professional looking way? Did you use a sketch? Reflect?
yes yes yes
6) Sketch included somewhere in paper. Yes/No = 0 or 10 / 10
Reflect :yes
7) Materials section. 3 pts for title/6 pts for some elaboration/ 10 for a thorough
preliminary job = 0 or 3 or 6 or 10 / 10
Reflect :6
8) Have you made contributions to the blog? Yes/No = 0 or 10 / 10
no
How many posts (about) did you make. Did you write thoughtful reflections?
9) 0 words = 0. 100-300 words = 6. 300-500 = 8. 500+ = 10/10. _____/10
Reflect10
10) Handed in on time. Yes/No = 0 or 10 / 10
Reflectyes
Total = ___86___/ 100
SECTION B
This is the second semester for research and report writing. You just graded the first draft of your paper for semester two. How do you feel about the grade you gave yourself? What areas should you improve for the second and third drafts?
How do you feel about the quality of the paper you have just handed in?
I feel very satisfy
How do you feel about the quality of learning and understanding you have been developing about your technology of choice?
the quality is very good
How does this help you link English to Engineering?
you need English to no about materials
What do you still wonder, or want to find out about your research topic?
nothing
Keep this in your research log when finished
Name: Yousef Saeed A-Sharif
ReplyDeleteClass: 2TA
Date: 05/04/2009
Research Topic: Rocketry
SECTION A
1) 10/10 articles = 10/10
Title of the articles:
1.Ejection Seat
2.Helicopter
3.Parachute
4.Pocket PC
5.RFID
6.Silk
7.Trains
8.Population
9.Psychological Pollution
10.Turbo
2) Cover page with word total (5) and contents (5) = 10/10
Reflect
3) 5 articles (2 pts each) = 10/10
Which did you use from above (see rubric 1)
4) PPT in appendix exported to word. Yes = 10
Was it included in the paper in a professional way? Was is separate?
5) Webspiration mind-map. yes = 10
Did you use webspiration and were you able to include this document in a professional looking way? Did you use a sketch? Reflect?
6) Sketch included somewhere in paper. Yes = 10
Reflect
7) Materials section. 3 pts for title/6 pts for some elaboration/ 10 for a thorough
preliminary job =10
Reflect
8) Have you made contributions to the blog? Yes= 10
How many posts (about) did you make. Did you write thoughtful reflections?
9) 0 words = 0. 100-300 words = 6. 300-500 = 8. 500+ = 10/10. 1000 words =10
Reflect
10) Handed in on time. No = 0
Reflect
Total = 90 / 100
SECTION B
This is the second semester for research and report writing. You just graded the first draft of your paper for semester two. How do you feel about the grade you gave yourself? What areas should you improve for the second and third drafts?
I think its not that bad but I should score more in the next term. I should focus on handing
The paper on time.
How do you feel about the quality of the paper you have just handed in?
supreme
How do you feel about the quality of learning and understanding you have been developing about your technology of choice?
I think its super
How does this help you link English to Engineering?
You need to be equipped with a professional and outstanding knowledge in the English language in order to understand the basics of engineering and to find it easy to communicate with others regarding engineer.
What do you still wonder, or want to find out about your research topic?
I want to know more about the life outside the Earth … is it possible or not
Name: Adnan Jassim
ReplyDeleteClass: 2TA
Date: 5-4-2009
Research Topic: The invisible cloak
SECTION A
1) 13/10 articles = 10/10
Title of the articles:
Video game
• Video clips
• Blue-ray Disc
• Calculator
• Laser
• Cloak of invisibility from Wikipedia
• Cloak of invisibility from How Stuff Work
• Invisible cloak moves closer to reality
• Cloak of invisibility : Fact or fiction
• Disappearing act
• Launch vehicle
• The weight of The Matter
• Submarine
2) Cover page with word total (5) and contents (5) = 8/10
Reflect
3) 5 articles (2 pts each) = 8/10
Which did you use from above (see rubric 1)
4) PPT in appendix exported to word. Yes = 8 / 10
Was it included in the paper in a professional way? Was is separate?
5) Webspiration mind-map. Yes = 8 / 10
Did you use webspiration and were you able to include this document in a professional looking way? Did you use a sketch? Reflect?
6) Sketch included somewhere in paper. Yes = 7 / 10
Reflect
7) Materials section. 3 pts for title/6 pts for some elaboration/ 10 for a thorough
preliminary job 8 / 10
Reflect
8) Have you made contributions to the blog? Yes = 9 / 10
How many posts (about) did you make. Did you write thoughtful reflections?
9) 0 words = 0. 100-300 words = 6. 300-500 = 8. 500+ = 10/10. 10/10
Reflect
10) Handed in on time. Yes = 10 / 10
Reflect
Total = 86/ 100
SECTION B
This is the second semester for research and report writing. You just graded the first draft of your paper for semester two. How do you feel about the grade you gave yourself? What areas should you improve for the second and third drafts?
The grades are okay for the time being because that what I deserved. There are many ways for catching up. I feel that I got to give the articles more time to read and organizing.
How do you feel about the quality of the paper you have just handed in?
Honestly, it’s quite good but it’s haven’t been done in professional way.
How do you feel about the quality of learning and understanding you have been developing about your technology of choice? It’s good quality and for sure it developed us especially in our major as it covered some topics.
How does this help you link English to Engineering?
The English is the base of our studies in many ways. By collecting several articles we get little wide knowledge about the engineering’s stuff.
What do you still wonder, or want to find out about your research topic?
Personally, I still wondering about how does the invisibility works it quite weird but nothing is possible in the science’s fields.
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ReplyDeleteName: Ahmed Khalfan Abdulla
ReplyDeleteClass: 2TA
Date: 5-4-2009
Research Topic: You Power (Nanotechnology)
SECTION A
1) 10/10 articles = 10/10
Title of the articles:
1. NASA
2. IBM
3. Carbon Nanotube
4. Short History
5. Nanotechnology
6. Chemistry world
7. Energy harvesting
8. Nissan GT-R Cobra N+
9. Anime
10. The environmental problem in UAE
2) Cover page with word total (5) and contents (5) = 7/10
Reflect
3) 5 articles (2 pts each) = 10/10
Which did you use from above (see rubric 1)
1. NASA
2. IBM
3. Carbon Nanotube
4. Short History
5. Nanotechnology
4) PPT in appendix exported to word. Yes/No = 0 or 10 / 10
No . but I print it out
Was it included in the paper in a professional way? Was is separate?
Will not in professional way but it’s separate.
5) Webspiration mind-map. Yes/No = 0 or 10 / 10
No
Did you use webspiration and were you able to include this document in a professional looking way? Did you use a sketch? Reflect?
Yes I use sketch reflect
6) Sketch included somewhere in paper. Yes/No = 10 or 10 / 10
Yep
Reflect
7) Materials section. 3 pts for title/6 pts for some elaboration/ 10 for a thorough
preliminary job = 0 or 3 or 6 or 10 / 10 ---- 6/10
I didn’t put materials in its own section but I do include it in IBM section .
Reflect
8) Have you made contributions to the blog? Yes/No =0 or 10 / 10
Yes
How many posts (about) did you make. Did you write thoughtful reflections?
9) 0 words = 0. 100-300 words = 6. 300-500 = 8. 500+ = 10/10. 10/10
500+
Reflect
10) Handed in on time. Yes/No = 0 or 10 / 10
I don’t know, it should be handed on Thursday April, 1st 2009 but they delayed it to Sunday which is today.
Reflect
Total = 63/ 100
SECTION B
This is the second semester for research and report writing. You just graded the first draft of your paper for semester two. How do you feel about the grade you gave yourself? What areas should you improve for the second and third drafts?
How do you feel about the quality of the paper you have just handed in?
Not that one which I want, I’ve not much of time because of my work, but I have to find a way to hand a perfect one.
How do you feel about the quality of learning and understanding you have been developing about your technology of choice?
More than what I expect.
How does this help you link English to Engineering?
Well, now I’m able to read, write and speak, and my vocabulary increased not twice but more than forth, thanks to my teachers.
What do you still wonder, or want to find out about your research topic?
Not too much; but I’ll try to be a scientist on Nanotechnology as far as I live.
Tonight, April 5, I will ask you to take a look at your paper and fill out the following form while you are looking your paper. Please be as honest as possible and make comments to support your decision(s).
ReplyDeleteIt may take you some time - so please relax and take the time to work on this reflection properly.
Name: saif saif al-shehhi
Class: 2TA
Date: 5-4-2009
Research Topic: Computer
SECTION A
1) ___/10 articles = 10/10
Title of the articles:
1. An Illustrated History of Computers part#1
2.History of computer
3.Computer security
4. Networking
5.Networking admistrator
6. The Dangers of Cigrette Smoking
7. New Mammal Species Discovered In Europe
8. Abu Dhabi Motorsports Management to break even by 2012
9.Rain continues to shower on parts of UAE
10. Al Ain beat Al Wahda to win etisalat Cup
2) Cover page with word total (5) and contents (5) = _10/10
Reflect
3) 5 articles (2 pts each) = 10/10
1. An Illustrated History of Computers part#1
2.History of computer
3.Computer security
4. Networking
5.Networking admistrator
4) PPT in appendix exported to word. Yes = 10 / 10
Was it included in the paper in a professional way? Yes
Was separate? Yes
5) Webspiration mind-map. Yes= 8/ 10
Did you use webspiration and were you able to include this document in a professional looking way? No, but I have account and this is my address :
http://mywebspiration.com/launch.php
Did you use a sketch? Yes
Reflect?
I make webspiration account , but I did not use it. I used main map by hand
6) Sketch included somewhere in paper. Yes= 10 / 10
Reflect?
I made sketch about computer and I put some information in it about the materials and where we find it in the computer.
7) Materials section. 3 pts for title/6 pts for some elaboration/ 10 for a thorough
preliminary job = 5/ 10
Reflect?
I did not make section in the research paper , but you can in side may writing and in the sketch.
8) Have you made contributions to the blog? Yes = 7 / 10
How many posts (about) did you make. All of them accept last two and one before
Did you write thoughtful reflections? yes
9) 0 words = 0. 100-300 words = 6. 300-500 = 8. 500+ = 10/10
Reflect?
I wrote more than one thousand in this paper
10) Handed in on time. Yes = 10 / 10
Reflect?
I handed my writing on time on April 5, 2009
Total = 90/ 100
SECTION B
This is the second semester for research and report writing. You just graded the first draft of your paper for semester two.
#How do you feel about the grade you gave yourself?
It is good, but it is not final grade
#What areas should you improve for the second and third drafts?
I have poor computer skills and I face some problem in blog
#How do you feel about the quality of the paper you have just handed in?
It is not my best work, but I think it is good
#How do you feel about the quality of learning and understanding you have been developing about your technology of choice?
I have improve in the writing skills
#How does this help you link English to Engineering?
it is help me to learn how write the report
What do you still wonder, or want to find out about your research topic?
rely, I want find more about computer materials and how computer works
Keep this in your research log when finished
Name: Abdullah Ahmed Allay
ReplyDeleteClass: 2FA
Date: 5/April/2009
Research Topic: Hovercraft
SECTION A
1) 10/10 articles = 10/10
Title of the articles:
1. Chewing gum
2. Chili pepper
3. Dell
4. Ship
5. Submarine
6. PS3
7. Car
8. MSN
9. Messenger
10. Fishing boat
11. Glasses
12. Europeans take anger on to streets
13. Death toll drops on Dubai roads
14. Iranian sailors and rescued (I’ve Emailed them but they didn’t replied me. talramahi@thenational.ae This the email that I used to contact them with it)
Abdullah student from RAK HCT,
What is the problem do you have in the sea? Weather for example
And there is a port in the RAK did they have been on it before?
2) Cover page with word total (5) and contents (5) = 10/10
Reflect
3) 5 articles (2 pts each) = 10/10
Which did you use from above (see rubric 1)
4) PPT in appendix exported to word. Yes = 10 / 10
Was it included in the paper in a professional way? Was is separate? No it not professional way
5) Webspiration mind-map. Yes = 10 / 10
Did you use webspiration and were you able to include this document in a professional looking way? Did you use a sketch? Reflect? Yes
6) Sketch included somewhere in paper. Yes = 10 / 10
Reflect
7) Materials section. 3 pts for title/6 pts for some elaboration/ 10 for a thorough
preliminary job = 10 / 10
Reflect
8) Have you made contributions to the blog? Yes = 10 / 10
How many posts (about) did you make. Did you write thoughtful reflections?
9) 1000words = 0. 100-300 words = 6. 300-500 = 8. 500+ = 10/10. 10/10
Reflect
10) Handed in on time. Yes = 10 / 10
Reflect
Total = 95/ 100
SECTION B
This is the second semester for research and report writing. You just graded the first draft of your paper for semester two. How do you feel about the grade you gave yourself? What areas should you improve for the second and third drafts? Like usual the first draft has some mistakes I will try to add something and correct the wrongs.
How do you feel about the quality of the paper you have just handed in? it ok and it helps us to get good organize .
How do you feel about the quality of learning and understanding you have been developing about your technology of choice? Really we use the technology in many of our work and this is good point because in future the technology has improving to helps us .
How does this help you link English to Engineering? In many jobs we there are many different people from many different countries. English is the main language that connect all language with other.
What do you still wonder, or want to find out about your research topic? To have it in UAE.
Name: Fayez Faisal
ReplyDeleteClass: 2TA
Date: 4/5/2009
Research Topic: jet packs
SECTION A
1) 10/10 articles = 10/10
Title of the articles:
1.mixed doubles fortune for Mirza
2.you’ll want one of these
3.super vision
4.my other car is a spaceship
5.jet packs
6. hi tech communication
7. home cinema system
8. History of jet engines
9.jet engine components
10. Jet engines types
11.transportation
12.jet aircraft
13.iphone 3g
2) Cover page with word total (5) and contents (5) = 10/10
Reflect
I have included the topic and my details, for the contents I separated my ideas and had each idea explained alone
3) 5 articles (2 pts each) = 10/10
Which did you use from above (see rubric 1)
1. Jet engines types
2.jet packs
3.history of jet engines
4.jet engine components
5.jet engines types
4) PPT in appendix exported to word. Yes = 10 / 10
Was it included in the paper in a professional way? yes Was is separate? no
5) Webspiration mind-map. Yes = 10 / 10
Did you use webspiration and were you able to include this document in a professional looking way? yes Did you use a sketch? yes Reflect? I came out with my ideas and made a plan using the webspiration
6) Sketch included somewhere in paper. Yes = 10 / 10
Reflect
I drew a jet pack and showed the parts with the materials they are made of
7) Materials section. 3 pts for title/6 pts for some elaboration/ 10 for a thorough
preliminary job = 10 / 10
Reflect
I included the same ideas I have explained in my sketch
8) Have you made contributions to the blog? Yes= 10 / 10
How many posts (about) did you make. Did you write thoughtful reflections? All of them
9) 0 words = 0. 100-300 words = 6. 300-500 = 8. 500+ = 10/10. 10/10
Reflect
I wrote all the ideas and explained them as possible I could and did my best
10) Handed in on time. No = 5 / 10
Reflect
I know I handed it late, and promise it will be the last time.
Total = 95/ 100
SECTION B
This is the second semester for research and report writing. You just graded the first draft of your paper for semester two. How do you feel about the grade you gave yourself? What areas should you improve for the second and third drafts? I feel good, just one thing I have
to improve which id handing my paper on time.
How do you feel about the quality of the paper you have just handed in? I think it excellent
but the final decision is up to my teacher.
How do you feel about the quality of learning and understanding you have been developing about your technology of choice?
For me it is very helpful and I am upgrading my skills
How does this help you link English to Engineering?
I discovered new information about things that are related to engineering.
What do you still wonder, or want to find out about your research topic?
Till now I am thinking about new things and I didn’t come out with new things
Name: Mohammed Rabba
ReplyDeleteClass: 2TA
Date: 5/4/2007
Research Topic: F-16 fighting falcon
SECTION A
1) 10/10 articles = 10/10
Title of the articles:
1.Developing countries want say in world finance
2.Nadal lands open glory in epic final
3.Six of the best in Hall of Fame
4.F-16 Fighting Falcon/ Wikipedia
5.The UAE F-16 Block 60 Desert Falcon Feet
6.General Dynamics/Lockheed Martin F-16 Fighting Falcon
7.F-16 Fighting Falcon
8.Qatar Petroleum and Anadarko Petroleum Corporation Sign New Exploration and Production Sharing Agreement.
9. Summary of technology
10. Information technology
11. Entertaiment technology
12. Man Accused of pointing Laser at Helicopter
13. Coal Industry Wins a Round on Mining
14. Review: ‘Shoemakers Tale beautiful feat of stagecraft
15. 2009 Victory Motorcycle
16. Future about F-16 fighting Falcon
2) Cover page with word total (5) and contents (5) = 10/10
Reflect
3) 5 articles (2 pts each) = 10/10
which did you use from above (see rubric 1)
1. F-16 Fighting Falcon/ Wikipedia
2. The UAE F-16 Block 60 Desert Falcon Feet
3. General Dynamics/Lockheed Martin F-16 Fighting Falcon
4. F-16 Fighting Falcon
5. Future about F-16 fighting Falcon
4) PPT in appendix exported to word. 10 / 10
Yes
Was it included in the paper in a professional way? Was is separate?
Yes-Separate
5) Webspiration mind-map. 10 / 10
Yes
Did you use webspiration and were you able to include this document in a professional looking way? Did you use a sketch? Reflect?
Yes but not professional way
6) Sketch included somewhere in paper. No = 0 / 10
No- outside (Separate)
Reflect
7) Materials section. 3 pts for title/6 pts for some elaboration/ 10 for a thorough
preliminary job = 10 / 10
Yes
Reflect
8) Have you made contributions to the blog? 10 / 10
Yes
How many posts (about) did you make. Did you write thoughtful reflections?
10 –Yes
9) 0 words = 0. 100-300 words = 6. 300-500 = 8. 500+ = 8/10
Reflect
10) Handed in on time. Yes/ 10 / 10
Reflect
Total = 80/ 100
SECTION B
This is the second semester for research and report writing. You just graded the first draft of your paper for semester two. How do you feel about the grade you gave yourself? What areas should you improve for the second and third drafts?
Nice result
Include power point inside paper
Research more information about materials
How do you feel about the quality of the paper you have just handed in?
I think it is nice and professional
How do you feel about the quality of learning and understanding you have been developing about your technology of choice?
Yes I think was nice
How does this help you link English to Engineering?
It helps to find new words and discover a lot of information for my topic
What do you still wonder, or want to find out about your research topic?
I wander about new features of F-16 in future
Keep this in your research log when finished
Name: Abdulla Saeed
ReplyDeleteClass: 2TA
Date: April 5, 2009
Research Topic: The Unique iPhone
SECTION A
1) 10/10 articles
Title of the articles:
1. iphone
2. Adobe Photoshop
3. The PlayStation Portable (
4. The iPhone
5. Wii
6. Etisalat ready iPhone package for UAE.
7. Environment issua in the UAE
8. High hotel costs are hurting event busines
9. New single currency deadline possible
10. Qatar Airways named best Middle East airline
2) Cover page with word total (5) and contents (5) = 10/10
Reflect
The cover page was simple just the research name and my personal information.
3) 5 articles (2 pts each) = 5/10
4) PPT in appendix exported to word. Yes/No = 10 / 10
Was it included in the paper in a professional way? Was is separate?
Yes, I think so.
5) Webspiration mind-map. Yes/No = 10 / 10
Did you use webspiration and were you able to include this document in a professional looking way? Did you use a sketch? Reflect?
Yes , I do think the sketch look professional and I used it.
6) Sketch included somewhere in paper. 10 / 10
t he sketching was quit enjoyable because I love sketching, and it was useful to imagine whats the materials that made of (the iPhone).
7) Materials section. 3 pts for title/6 pts for some elaboration/ 10 for a thorough
preliminary job = 5/10
Reflect
8) Have you made contributions to the blog? 8/ 10
How many posts (about) did you make. Did you write thoughtful reflections?
I did them all except three.
9) 0 words = 0. 100-300 words = 6. 300-500 = 8. 500+ = 10/10
10) Handed in on time. /No
Reflect
I had a busy week because the exams so I couldn’t finish.
Total = 93/100
SECTION B
This is the second semester for research and report writing. You just graded the first draft of your paper for semester two. How do you feel about the grade you gave yourself? What areas should you improve for the second and third drafts?
I think I did a very good job and I’m so happy that I finished now. I have to improve my writing a bit to make the research more professional.
How do you feel about the quality of the paper you have just handed in?
I think it’s perfect.
How do you feel about the quality of learning and understanding you have been developing about your technology of choice?
I developed a lot in my quality of learning and understanding. The more I write I the more I learn.
How does this help you link English to Engineering?
I think that we are studying English Engineering and that is what are we look for.
What do you still wonder, or want to find out about your research topic?
I just wondering about how the iPhone will look in the future?
Name: Majed Sultan ALBloushi
ReplyDeleteClass: 2TA
Date: 5/4/2009
Research Topic: Bluetooth
SECTION A
1) _10_/10 articles = __10_/10
Title of the articles:
1.Bluetooth from ( Wikipedia ).
2.I phone.
3.Play station 3.
4.Dell sees opportunity in IBM’s Sun move.
5.Bluetooth ( how it work ).
6.Bluetooth ( Hardware & Drivers ).
7.laptops.
8.Dell.
9.Top Five Bluetooth Device to Streamline your life.
10.Bluetooth.
2) Cover page with word total (5) and contents (5) = _10__/10
Reflect
1. Bluetooth from ( Wikipedia ).
2. Bluetooth ( how it work ).
3. Bluetooth ( Hardware & Drivers ).
4. Top Five Bluetooth Device to Streamline your life.
5.Bluetooth.
3) 5 articles (2 pts each) = __10__/10
4) PPT in appendix exported to word. Yes/No = 0 or 10 / 10
Was it included in the paper in a professional way? Was is separate? yes
5) Webspiration mind-map. Yes/No = 5 or 10 / 10
Did you use webspiration and were you able to include this document in a professional looking way? No
Did you use a sketch? yes
Reflect? I didn’t make the webspiration but I make a main map.
6) Sketch included somewhere in paper. Yes/No =8 or 10 / 10
Reflect? I make a sketch and it’s help me to know how many thing came below the Bluetooth, also I put the device and the material.
7) Materials section. 3 pts for title/6 pts for some elaboration/ 10 for a thorough
preliminary job = 5 / 10
Reflect? I write it on a sketch.
8) Have you made contributions to the blog? Yes/No = 6 or 10 / 10
How many posts (about) did you make. Did you write thoughtful reflections?
I wrote it all accept the last 3 . yes
9) 0 words = 0. 100-300 words = 6. 300-500 = 800+ = 10/10. _8__/10
Reflect? I wrote more than 750 and I gave the draft one to mr.richard.
10) Handed in on time. Yes/No = 7 / 10
Reflect? All handed in time with little late
Total = __77__/ 100
SECTION B
This is the second semester for research and report writing. You just graded the first draft of your paper for semester two. How do you feel about the grade you gave yourself? What areas should you improve for the second and third drafts?
I think the grade not really nice, but I can improve it in the writing skills and and write more information about Bluetooth.
How do you feel about the quality of the paper you have just handed in?
first thing I think my quality of handed not bad but I’m improving my writing skills and keep write .
How do you feel about the quality of learning and understanding you have been developing about your technology of choice?
It’s good and I get new information from my technology, befor I don’t know how to write Bluetooth but knaw I know how to write it also many words .
How does this help you link English to Engineering?
It’s help me to knaw the material what used for Bluetooth and the name for materials.
What do you still wonder, or want to find out about your research topic?
I wonder from this technology because it make the life easy and I fined a information but the Bluetooth will improve so it improving by years.
It is very interesting to read your feedback so far. Thanks for the thoughtful responses, and I think we see areas where we can improve.
ReplyDeleteRemember that the due date was April 1, then April 2, and now the 5th. I think as a draft version they do need to get in as you promised by tomorrow at the latest.
Thanks
Steve
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ReplyDeleteName: Omar Abdullah Al Shemaili
ReplyDeleteClass: 2TA
Date: 5/4/2009
Research Topic: Technology of GPS System
SECTION A
1) 10/10 articles = 10/10
Title of the articles:
1. History of Computer
2. Mobile Phone
3. The Camera
4. Microscope
5. Use an Electronic Dictionary to Improve your Vocabulary
6. USB Memory Stick
7. TomTom
8. Climbing Robots Use Clingfilm Technology
9. Bagless Vacuums
10. Why do Diesel Engines have a Characteristic Rattle
2) Cover page with word total (5) and contents (5) = 10/10
3) 5 articles (2 pts each) = 10/10
which did you use from above (see rubric 1)
4) PPT in appendix exported to word. Yes/No = 0 or 10 / 10
Yes, 10/10
Was it included in the paper in a professional way? Was is separate?
Yes, it was
5) Webspiration mind-map. Yes/No = 0 or 10 / 10
Yes, I used it more, 10/10
Did you use webspiration and were you able to include this document in a professional looking way? Did you use a sketch? Reflect?
Yes, I did
6) Sketch included somewhere in paper. Yes/No = 0 or 10 / 10
Yes, I did so
7) Materials section. 3 pts for title/6 pts for some elaboration/ 10 for a thorough
preliminary job = 0 or 3 or 6 or 10 / 10
Yes, I talked about the materials section
8) Have you made contributions to the blog? Yes/No = 0 or 10 / 10
How many posts (about) did you make. Did you write thoughtful reflections?
In Fact, I did all Posts.
9) 0 words = 0. 100-300 words = 6. 300-500 = 8. 500+ = 10/10. _____/10
I did my Report and it is 1606 words
10) Handed in on time. Yes/No = 0 or 10 / 10
Yes
Total = 95 / 100
SECTION B
This is the second semester for research and report writing. You just graded the first draft of your paper for semester two. How do you feel about the grade you gave yourself? What areas should you improve for the second and third drafts?
How do you feel about the quality of the paper you have just handed in?
It is a good idea and it shows all my done work.
How do you feel about the quality of learning and understanding you have been developing about your technology of choice?
I did know much information about the technology of GPS System. I built my knowledge about the technology especially.
How does this help you link English to Engineering?
We are studying and learning to apply what we studied.
What do you still wonder, or want to find out about your research topic?
How will satellites work without power.
Keep this in your research log when finished
First of all, thanks for handing in some excellent work on your chosen technology topics.
ReplyDeleteSome interesting comments here on the blog - it's good to see that you are thinking about the different aspects of your report. I think it's a very good way for you guys to focus on the different qualities your work can have. I look forward to hearing about the modifications to the marking criteria you develop with Steve today.
Best wishes,
Richard
It may take you some time - so please relax and take the time to work on this reflection properly.
ReplyDeleteName: AMMAR ALSHEHHi
Class: Date: 2TA
Research Topic: USB flash drive
SECTION A
1) 14/10 articles = 10/10
Title of the articles:
1. THE FUTURE OF USB FLASH DRIVES
2. History of USB Flash Drive
3.USB flash drive
4. USB Flash Drive - Advantages and Limits
5. USB flash drive different from above
6. THE CONSEQUENCES (cost) OF RAPID POPULATION GROWTH
7. Center offers accreditation scheme for online educators
8. Sony Cuts Price of PlayStation 2 to $99.99
9. Electrical Engineering and Computer Science
10. Aeronautics and Astronautics
11. How can Technology Help the Environment
12. iPhone Users Rejoice: There's a New Video Site in Town
13. internal combustion engine
14. Materials Science and Engineering
2) Cover page with word total (5) and contents (5) = 10/10
Reflect
3) 5 articles (2 pts each) = 10/10
Which did you use from above (see rubric 1)
4) PPT in appendix exported to word. Yes = 8 or 10 / 10
Yes I include it, but it separate
Was it included in the paper in a professional way? Was is separate?
Really I put it all together but I will do it.
Yes it looks nice and I like it .
5) Webspiration mind-map. Yes/No =9 or 10 / 10
Did you use webspiration and were you able to include this document in a professional looking way? Did you use a sketch? Reflect?
Yes I think its look nice I don’t know if it professional
Yes I use the sketch
6) Sketch included somewhere in paper. Yes/No = 8 or 10 / 10
Reflect
7) Materials section. 3 pts for title/6 pts for some elaboration/ 10 for a thorough
preliminary job = 10 / 10
Reflect
8) Have you made contributions to the blog? Yes/No = 8 or 10 / 10
How many posts (about) did you make. Did you write thoughtful reflections?
Always late so but I do my work.
9) 0 words = 0. 100-300 words = 6. 300-500 = 8. 500+ =.10/10
Reflect
10) Handed in on time. Yes/No = yes or 10 / 10
Reflect
Total = 93/ 100
SECTION B
This is the second semester for research and report writing. You just graded the first draft of your paper for semester two. How do you feel about the grade you gave yourself? What areas should you improve for the second and third drafts?
How do you feel about the quality of the paper you have just handed in?
It not the final draft but I do every thing you did ask for it.
But if you need it good organization I will do it in second draft.
How do you feel about the quality of learning and understanding you have been developing about your technology of choice?
I think I improve my skills that for sure will help me.
How does this help you link English to Engineering?
It help me a lot I no more technical word than before
What do you still wonder, or want to find out about your research topic?
I satisfied what I got
Keep this in your research log when finished
sir I have posted it in wrong place sorry
Name: Ahmed Al-Teaniji
ReplyDeleteClass: 2TA
Date: April 5, 2009
Research Topic: Modern Home Technology
SECTION A
1) _10__/10 articles = _10__/10
Title of the articles:
1. Smart homes – 12 steps to savings.
2. Space Heating and Cooling.
3. Quick tips for the home.
4. Insulation.
5. Insulated Concrete Forms.
6. Will machines outsmart man?
7. Smart homes offer a helping hand.
8. Smart homes to eat their rubbish.
9. Sensor.
10. How Roofing Materials work.
11. Online learning
2) Cover page with word total (5) and contents (5) = 10 /10
Reflect
3) 5 articles (2 pts each) = 2 /10
Sensor
4) PPT in appendix exported to word. Yes = 10 / 10
5) Webspiration mind-map. No = 0 / 10
6) Sketch included somewhere in paper. No = 10 / 10
7) Materials section. 3 pts for title/6 pts for some elaboration/ 10 for a thorough
preliminary job = 8 / 10
8) Have you made contributions to the blog? Yes 9/ 10
9) 0 words = 0. 100-300 words = 6. 300-500 = 8. 500+ = 10/10. ___10__/10
10) Handed in on time. Yes 10 / 10
Total = __79___/ 100
SECTION B
This is the second semester for research and report writing. You just graded the first draft of your paper for semester two. How do you feel about the grade you gave yourself? What areas should you improve for the second and third drafts?
Very bad…. I’ll try to look for more subjects related to materials and other sections like local home tech.
How do you feel about the quality of the paper you have just handed in?
Not so bad …..
How do you feel about the quality of learning and understanding you have been developing about your technology of choice?
Actually, it has benefited my knowledge in home area and the materials used in different places
How does this help you link English to Engineering?
I have discovered many vocabularies which were very much related to engineering.
What do you still wonder, or want to find out about your research topic?
I really want to connect my paper to local homes … so I will search more in this area
Tonight, April 5, I will ask you to take a look at your paper and fill out the following form while you are looking your paper. Please be as honest as possible and make comments to support your decision(s).
ReplyDeleteIt may take you some time - so please relax and take the time to work on this reflection properly.
Name: _HASAN AHMED__________________________________
Class: __2TA_____________
Date: _12/4/2009______________
Research Topic: __ROBOT______________________
SECTION A
1) _10__/10 articles = _10___/10
Title of the articles:
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
6.
7.
8.
9.
10.
2) Cover page with word total (5) and contents (5) = ___6__/10
Reflect
3) 5 articles (2 pts each) = __10__/10
Which did you use from above (see rubric 1)
4) PPT in appendix exported to word. Yes/No = 10 / 10
Was it included in the paper in a professional way? Was is separate?
NO
5) Webspiration mind-map. Yes/No = 7 / 10
yes
Did you use webspiration and were you able to include this document in a professional looking way? Did you use a sketch? Reflect? NO
6) Sketch included somewhere in paper. Yes/No = 7 / 10
Reflect
7) Materials section. 3 pts for title/6 pts for some elaboration/ 10 for a thorough
preliminary job = 0 or 3 or 6 or 10 / 10
NO
Reflect
8) Have you made contributions to the blog? Yes/No = 5 or 10 / 10
How many posts (about) did you make. Did you write thoughtful reflections?
MABY 3
9) 0 words = 0. 100-300 words = 6. 300-500 = 8. 500+ = 10/10. __10___/10
Reflect
10) Handed in on time. Yes/No = 0 or 5 / 10
NO
Reflect
Total = ___65___/ 100
SECTION B
This is the second semester for research and report writing. You just graded the first draft of your paper for semester two. How do you feel about the grade you gave yourself? What areas should you improve for the second and third drafts?
How do you feel about the quality of the paper you have just handed in?
I think I can improve it because it first draft
How do you feel about the quality of learning and understanding you have been developing about your technology of choice?
I think i improved myself
How does this help you link English to Engineering?
I know more technical words
What do you still wonder, or want to find out about your research topic?
I want to learn more about technology
Keep this in your research log when finished
Name: _Mohamed Ali Al Khawwar__________________________________
ReplyDeleteClass: ___2TA____________
Date: ____5-4-09___________
Research Topic: __BlackBerry Storm 9500______________________
SECTION A
1) __11_/10 articles = __10__/10
Title of the articles:
1.GPS Capabilities
2.Blackberry storm coast
3.How blackberry works
4.Espresso Delivery
5.Independent taxi drivers feel hounded
6.Irans war of words over islands condemned
7.Bat-spy plane
8.Sony newest laptops
9.mobilephones
10.computer flash memory
11. Computer speakers
2) Cover page with word total (5) and contents (5) = 5/10
Reflect
3) 5 articles (2 pts each) = __10__/10
Which did you use from above (see rubric 1)
4) PPT in appendix exported to word. Yes/No = 0 or 10 / 10
Was it included in the paper in a professional way? Was is separate? No
5) Webspiration mind-map. Yes/No = 0 or 10 / 10
Did you use webspiration and were you able to include this document in a professional looking way? Did you use a sketch? Reflect? I did a sketch only
6) Sketch included somewhere in paper. Yes/No = 0 or 10 / 10
Reflect
7) Materials section. 3 pts for title/6 pts for some elaboration/ 10 for a thorough
preliminary job = 0 or 3 or 6 or 10 / 10
Reflect
8) Have you made contributions to the blog? Yes/No = 0 or 10 / 10
How many posts (about) did you make. Did you write thoughtful reflections?
9) 0 words = 0. 100-300 words = 6. 300-500 = 8. 500+ = 10/10. __10___/10
Reflect
10) Handed in on time. Yes/No = 0 or 10 / 10
Reflect
Total = __85____/ 100
SECTION B
This is the second semester for research and report writing. You just graded the first draft of your paper for semester two. How do you feel about the grade you gave yourself? What areas should you improve for the second and third drafts?
How do you feel about the quality of the paper you have just handed in?
It’s not professional, but it cover what needed.
How do you feel about the quality of learning and understanding you have been developing about your technology of choice? I understood a lot.
How does this help you link English to Engineering? Engineers are required to do researches, so I have to start learning how to do it.
What do you still wonder, or want to find out about your research topic?
The future improvement.
Name: Aamer Ahmed
ReplyDeleteClass: 2TA
Date: 18-5-2009
Research Topic: Aircraft
SECTION A
1) 10/10 articles = 10/10
Title of the articles:
Aircraft
1. Aviation history
2. Fixed-wing aircraft
3. Rotorcraft (Helicopters)
4. Noise pollution (Aircraft)
5. Glider (sailplane)
6. Balloon
7. Wireless connection
8. Conserving battery power
9. Stress–strain
10. Steel
2) Cover page with word total (5) and contents (5) = 10/10
Reflect
3) 5 articles (2 pts each) = 10/10
Which did you use from above (see rubric 1)
Aviation history
Fixed-wing aircraft
Steel
4) PPT in appendix exported to word. Yes = 9 / 10
Was it included in the paper in a professional way? Was is separate? ? Was is separate
5) Webspiration mind-map. Yes = 10 / 10
Did you use webspiration and were you able to include this document in a professional looking way? Did you use a sketch? Reflect? Yes of course, I showed you if you remember.
6) Sketch included somewhere in paper. Yes = 10 / 10
Reflect
7) Materials section. 3 pts for title/6 pts for some elaboration/ 10 for a thorough
preliminary job 6 / 10
8) Have you made contributions to the blog? Yes = 9 / 10
How many posts (about) did you make. Did you write thoughtful reflections?
9) 0 words = 0. 100-300 words = 6. 300-500 = 8. 500+ = 10/10. 10/10
Reflect
10) Handed in on time. Yes = 9 / 10
Reflect
Total = 87/ 100
SECTION B
This is the second semester for research and report writing. You just graded the first draft of your paper for semester two. How do you feel about the grade you gave yourself? What areas should you improve for the second and third drafts?
I did my best to on it .In addition I’m proudly that it’s in a good level, and I have to improve myself more in the writing to be in more high level.
How do you feel about the quality of the paper you have just handed in?
I feel that is a good paper.
How do you feel about the quality of learning and understanding you have been developing about your technology of choice?
Exultant quality also it developed us in our major because we got more deeply.
How does this help you link English to Engineering?
It made our English in our major better for example it improves many skills especially in reading, scanning for the important things and the writing .so really it’s a brilliant idea to link English to Engineering for supporting us in the studying and generally to be our nation and the world in a good life.
What do you still wonder, or want to find out about your research topic?
I hope that we and the thinkers people of the safety can help aircraft world to be life without accident or when there are some felling down of the aircraft in any case there are some solution such as there are some balloon opening in the emergency case or the aircraft such as Emirates Boeing 777have the gliding system when the machine is not working.
In addition, Insa Allah we can have big conference in the world for the aircraft to share good ideas between the government and big companies.