Thursday, April 30, 2009

Draft 2 Grading

Name: __________________________________

Date: _______________ 2009

PAPERS MUST BE YOUR WORK

For draft 2, you decided that the rubrics would be:

1. 10 Blogs = 1 pt each = 10% (There were less than 10. Let's go for 5 @ 2 points each)

Your score: _____ 10

2. 4 additional articles = 10%

List the 4 new references (copy and paste is fine):

a) ___________________________
b) ___________________________
c) ___________________________
d) ___________________________



3. Glossary of 20 key words = 10%

Your score = _____ 20 (copy and paste terms below)





4. Word limits = 30% (Must be e-mailed to Steve)

500-800 = 5%, 800-1200 = 10%, 1200-1600=20%, 1600-2000 = 30%

Must not include large block quotes. Only your writing here.

Your score out of 30 = _____ 30


5. Materials section = 40%

Did you add a materials box = yes / no
Did you add Ahmed's 6 questions = yes / no
Did you use olive green and tan = yes / no
Did you add Richard's section = yes / no
Did you start to answer the questions = yes / no
Did you use your time to develop this professionally = yes / no

What grade do you feel it deserves out of 40% = _____ 40

TOTAL = _____ %
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21 comments:

  1. Adnan JassimApril 30, 2009 at 8:46 AM

    Name: Adnan Jassim

    Date: 30/4/2009

    PAPERS MUST BE YOUR WORK

    For draft 2, you decided that the rubrics would be:

    1. 10 Blogs = 1 pt each = 10% (There were less than 10. Let's go for 5 @ 2 points each)

    Your score:10/10

    2. 4 additional articles = yes 10%

    List the 4 new references (copy and paste is fine):

    a) http://periodic.lanl.gov/
    elements/6.html.
    b) http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Carbon_nanotube.

    c) http://science.howstuffworks.com/ nanotechnology2.htm.

    d) http://www.pa.msu.edu/cmp/csc/nanotube.html




    3. Glossary of 20 key words = 10%

    1. Invisible: Can not be seen, disappeared.
    2. Cloak: type of clothing.
    3. Metamaterials: kind of materials which gets its properties from its structure rather it composition.
    4. Serve: Doing thing.
    5. Electromagnetic waves: wave that have electronic and magnetic properties.
    6. Composite: complex.
    7. Macroscopic: macroscopically thing very small.
    8. Fiction: not real
    9. Mysteries: not clear. Very deep.
    10. Manmade: Thing made by the human.
    11. Concept: Idea.
    12. Interact: it the verb from interaction
    13. Consequences: results.
    14. Sneak: walking among the people without observing you.
    15. Weird: strange.
    16. Revolution: like development.
    17. Doubt: suspicion.
    18. Field: domain
    19. Vision: seeing.
    20. Origin: belongs to an original thing.



    Your score = 20/20 (copy and paste terms below)





    4. Word limits = 30% (Must be e-mailed to Steve)

    1200-1600=20%

    Must not include large block quotes. Only your writing here.

    Your score out of 30 = 20/ 30


    5. Materials section = 40%

    Did you add a materials box = yes
    Did you add Ahmed's 6 questions = yes
    Did you use olive green and tan = yes
    Did you add Richard's section = yes
    Did you start to answer the questions = yes
    Did you use your time to develop this professionally = no

    What grade do you feel it deserves out of 40% = 37/40

    TOTAL = 87 %

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  2. Ahmed Al-teanijiApril 30, 2009 at 12:19 PM

    Name: Al-Teaniji, Ahmed
    Date: 30 April 2009

    PAPERS MUST BE YOUR WORK

    For draft 2, you decided that the rubrics would be:

    1. 10 Blogs = 1 pt each = 10% (There were less than 10. Let's go for 5 @ 2 points each)

    Your score: 10/ 10

    2. 4 additional articles = 10/10%

    List the 4 new references (copy and paste is fine):

    a) http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Stone_Age#Shelter_and_habitat
    b) http://www.cement.org/basics/concretebasics_concretebasics.asp
    c) http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Concrete_recycling
    d) http://home.howstuffworks.com/home-improvement/remodeling/concrete-countertop1.htm


    3. Glossary of 20 key words = 10%

    Your score = 7.5/ 20 (copy and paste terms below)
    1. Actuator: A device operates another machine or system.
    2. Aggregate: either small stone or sand.
    3. Ancestors: ancient people.
    4. Depletion: to decrease something.
    5. ECO: environment.
    6. Emissions: harmful gases.
    7. Homo habilis : an extinct species.
    8. Green home: home built with green materials.
    9. Smart home: Automated home.
    10. Zero energy home: home with zero energy consumption.
    11. Pebbles: either small stone or sand.
    12. Precast: concrete block or slab.
    13. Ready-mixed concrete: ready mix in a factory to use.
    14. Vanished: dispersed.
    15. Utility grid: AC electricity distribution from generation stations.

    4. Word limits = 30% (Must be e-mailed to Steve)

    500-800 = 5%, 800-1200 = 10%, 1200-1600=20%, 1600-2000 = 30%

    Must not include large block quotes. Only your writing here.

    Your score out of 30 = 30 / 30

    5. Materials section = 40%

    Did you add a materials box = yes but I made something different if not excepted I’ll put it in a box.
    Did you add Ahmed's 6 questions = yes
    Did you use olive green and tan = yes in another way.
    Did you add Richard's section = yes in another way.
    Did you start to answer the questions = yes.
    Did you use your time to develop this professionally = yes

    What grade do you feel it deserves out of 40% = 40 / 40

    TOTAL = 97.5 %

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  3. SAIF SAIFMay 3, 2009 at 8:23 AM

    Name: saif saif

    Date: 3/5/ 2009

    PAPERS MUST BE YOUR WORK

    For draft 2, you decided that the rubrics would be:

    1. 10 Blogs = 1 pt each = 10% (There were less than 10. Let's go for 5 @ 2 points each)

    Your score: 10/ 10

    2. 4 additional articles = 10/10%

    List the 4 new references (copy and paste is fine):

    a) http://www.safewater.org/PDFS/resourcesknowthefacts/Mining+and+Water+Pollution.pdf

    b) http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Copper#Copper_Age

    c) http://web1.caryacademy.org/chemistry/rushin/StudentProjects/ElementWebSites/copper/uses_of_copper.htm

    d) http://www.matweb.com/reference/copper.aspx




    3. Glossary of 20 key words = 10%

    Your score = 10/ 20 (copy and paste terms below)





    4. Word limits = 20/30% (Must be e-mailed to Steve)

    500-800 = 5%, 800-1200 = 10%, 1200-1600=20%, 1600-2000 = 30%

    Must not include large block quotes. Only your writing here.

    Your score out of 30 = 20 30


    5. Materials section = 40%

    Did you add a materials box = yes
    Did you add Ahmed's 6 questions = yes
    Did you use olive green and tan = yes
    Did you add Richard's section = no
    Did you start to answer the questions = yes
    Did you use your time to develop this professionally = yes

    What grade do you feel it deserves out of 40% = 35

    TOTAL = 75 %

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  4. Abdullah SalehMay 3, 2009 at 8:43 AM

    Name: Abdullah Saleh

    Date: 2-5-2009

    PAPERS MUST BE YOUR WORK

    For draft 2, you decided that the rubrics would be:

    1. 10 Blogs = 1 pt each = 10% (There were less than 10. Let's go for 5 @ 2 points each)

    Your score: 10/ 10

    2. 4 additional articles = 10%

    List the 4 new references (copy and paste is fine):

    a) http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Aluminium
    b) http://www.csiro.au/science/ps1fd.html
    c) http://earth911.com/metal/aluminum-can/
    d) http://www.pubmedcentral.nih.gov/articlerender.fcgi?artid=1474938



    3. Glossary of 20 key words = 10%

    Your score = 20/ 20 (copy and paste terms below)
    1. Fiber Optics
    2. zero generation
    3. cellular
    4. commercial launch
    5. analog
    6. drawbacks
    7. cost-effective
    8. stylish devices
    9. Quartz
    10. Lead (kind of metal)
    11. Terminals
    12. Tantalum (Metallic element)
    13. Transistors
    14. Neodymium
    15. Cadmium
    16. Lithium
    17. Manganese
    18. Nickel
    19. solder
    20. resistors




    4. Word limits = 30% (Must be e-mailed to Steve)

    500-800 = 5%, 800-1200 = 10%, 1200-1600=20%, 1600-2000 = 30%

    Must not include large block quotes. Only your writing here.

    Your score out of 30 = 20/ 30


    5. Materials section = 40%

    Did you add a materials box = yes
    Did you add Ahmed's 6 questions = no
    Did you use olive green and tan = yes
    Did you add Richard's section = yes
    Did you start to answer the questions = yes
    Did you use your time to develop this professionally = yes

    What grade do you feel it deserves out of 40% = 30 40

    TOTAL = 94.5 %

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  5. YousefMay 3, 2009 at 8:53 AM

    Name: Yousef Saeed Al-Shareef

    Date: 3-5-2009

    PAPERS MUST BE YOUR WORK

    For draft 2, you decided that the rubrics would be:

    1. 10 Blogs = 1 pt each = 10% (There were less than 10. Let's go for 5 @ 2 points each)

    Your score: 10/10

    2. 4 additional articles = 10/10

    List the 4 new references (copy and paste is fine):

    a) Flight Instrument
    b) Nose Cone
    c) Supersonic
    d) Satellite



    3. Glossary of 20 key words = 10%

    Your score = 10/10
    Launch
    Propellant
    Space
    Instrument
    Aerodynamic
    Exterior
    Interior
    Aircraft
    Thrust
    Nozzle
    Missile
    Ejection seat
    Supersonic
    Combustion
    Exhaust
    Chamber
    Barrier
    Lunar
    Recoil
    Orbital
    Nose cone


    4. Word limits = 30% (2,300 words)


    Your score out of 30 = 30/30


    5. Materials section = 40%

    Did you add a materials box = yes
    Did you add Ahmed's 6 questions = yes
    Did you use olive green and tan = yes
    Did you add Richard's section = yes
    Did you start to answer the questions = yes
    Did you use your time to develop this professionally = I did but frankly I didn’t do much.

    What grade do you feel it deserves out of 40% = 37/ 40

    TOTAL = 97 %
    ARIGATO GOZAIMAZO Mr. Steve & Mr. Richard

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  6. Fayez FaisalMay 3, 2009 at 8:56 AM

    Name: Fayez Faisal

    Date: 2-5-2009

    PAPERS MUST BE YOUR WORK

    For draft 2, you decided that the rubrics would be:

    1. 10 Blogs = 1 pt each = 10% (There were less than 10. Let's go for 5 @ 2 points each)

    Your score: 10

    2. 4 additional articles = 10%

    List the 4 new references (copy and paste is fine):

    a) http://www.panda.org/what_we_do/footprint/agriculture/commodities/rubber/environmental_impacts/
    b) http://www.pa.msu.edu/sciencet/ask_st/090193.html
    c) http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Synthetic_rubber
    d) http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rubber


    3. Glossary of 20 key words = 10%

    Your score =10 (copy and paste terms below)
    1-vanes
    2-shafts
    3-compressor
    4-combustor
    5-nozzle
    6-piston
    7-combustion chamber
    8-airflow
    9-intake
    10valves
    11-synthetic
    12-rubber
    13-latex
    14-detonation
    15-elastomer
    16-optimum
    17-thrust
    18-bearings
    19-epoxy
    20-mechanical fatigue

    4. Word limits = 30% (Must be e-mailed to Steve)

    500-800 = 5%, 800-1200 = 10%, 1200-1600=20%, 1600-2000 = 30%

    Must not include large block quotes. Only your writing here.

    Your score out of 30 =30


    5. Materials section = 40%

    Did you add a materials box = yes
    Did you add Ahmed's 6 questions = yes
    Did you use olive green and tan = yes
    Did you add Richard's section = yes
    Did you start to answer the questions = yes
    Did you use your time to develop this professionally = yes

    What grade do you feel it deserves out of 40% = 35

    TOTAL = 95%

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  7. moheMay 3, 2009 at 9:00 AM

    Name: _mohammed Hassan ali_________________________________

    Date: _______________ 2009

    PAPERS MUST BE YOUR WORK

    For draft 2, you decided that the rubrics would be:

    1. 10 Blogs = 1 pt each = 10% (There were less than 10. Let's go for 5 @ 2 points each)

    Your score: _10____ 10

    2. 4 additional articles = 10%

    List the 4 new references (copy and paste is fine):

    a) _ http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Aluminium __________________________
    b) _ http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Aluminium#History __________________________
    c) _ http://www.aluminum.org/ __________________________
    d) _____ http://www.aluminum.org/AM/Template.cfm?Section=Recycling1&Template=/TaggedPage/TaggedPageDisplay.cfm&TPLID=55&ContentID=25968 ______________________



    3. Glossary of 20 key words = 10%

    Your score = _20____ 20 (copy and paste terms below)
    Capacity
    Dominance
    Profitable
    Aerospatiale
    Competitive
    Feasibility
    Odd
    Accommodate
    Crisis
    Configuration
    Albeit
    Freighter
    Approach
    Efficiency
    Aiming
    Wingtip
    Fences
    Cockpit
    Cargo
    Emission




    4. Word limits = 30% (Must be e-mailed to Steve)

    500-800 = 5%, 800-1200 = 10%, 1200-1600=20%, 1600-2000 = 30%

    Must not include large block quotes. Only your writing here.

    Your score out of 30 = __25___ 30


    5. Materials section = 40%

    Did you add a materials box = yes
    Did you add Ahmed's 6 questions = yes
    Did you use olive green and tan = yes
    Did you add Richard's section = / no
    Did you start to answer the questions = yes
    Did you use your time to develop this professionally = yes

    What grade do you feel it deserves out of 40% = _35____ 40

    TOTAL = 90_____ %

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  8. MohammedMay 3, 2009 at 10:37 AM

    Name: Mohammed Rabba

    Date: 3/5/2009

    PAPERS MUST BE YOUR WORK

    For draft 2, you decided that the rubrics would be:

    1. 10 Blogs = 1 pt each = 10% (There were less than 10. Let's go for 5 @ 2 points each)

    Your score: 10/ 10

    2. 4 additional articles = 7.5

    List the 4 new references (copy and paste is fine):

    a) en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Aluminum - 201k
    b) www.lenntech.com/Periodic-chart-elements/Al-en.htm
    c) http://www.csiro.au/science/ps1fd.html
    d) ___________________________

    I am not finish all question so I have 3 reference.


    3. Glossary of 20 key words = 10%

    Your score = 10%-20 (copy and paste terms below)
    Aircraft Aluminum= a light silver –coloured metal
    Composites= made up separate parts.
    Magnesium = a light grey metal that burns very brightly.
    Cockpit plane = the place where the pilot sits in a plane.
    Prototype = the first form of something new that is made before it is produced in large quantities.
    Configurations= the way in which the different parts of something are arranged.
    Sensors = a piece of equipment that reacts to physical changes.
    Infrared search = using a type of light that cannot be seen.
    Missiles = a weapon that travels long distances and explodes when it hits something.
    Perspective = a way of thinking about something.
    Revolution = a situation in which people completely change their government or political system, usually by force.
    Titanium =
    Consequences= a result or effect of something.
    Advanced = to progress and become better or more developed.
    Conformal = to obey a rule or to follow an accepted pattern.
    Power supply = is device to give power to a machine and vehicle.
    Contamination =to make something dirty, polluted, or poisonous by adding harmful substance.
    Tough= difficult to break or damage.
    Features = to be an important part or aspect of something.
    Discarding= to get rid of something that you no longer want or need.







    4. Word limits = 30% (Must be e-mailed to Steve)

    500-800 = 5%, 800-1200 = 10%, 1200-1600=20%, 1600-2000 = 30%

    Must not include large block quotes. Only your writing here.

    Your score out of 30 =30/30


    5. Materials section = 40%

    Did you add a materials box = yes
    Did you add Ahmed's 6 questions = yes
    Did you use olive green and tan = yes
    Did you add Richard's section = yes
    Did you start to answer the questions = yes
    Did you use your time to develop this professionally = yes

    What grade do you feel it deserves out of 40% = 40/40

    TOTAL = 97.5 %

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  10. Xx_ The LasT DaTe_xXMay 4, 2009 at 6:54 AM

    Name: Majed Sultan Mohammed

    Date: 4/5/2009

    PAPERS MUST BE YOUR WORK

    For draft 2, you decided that the rubrics would be:

    1. 10 Blogs = 1 pt each = 10% (There were less than 10. Let's go for 5 @ 2 points each)

    Your score: 8 /10

    2. 4 additional articles =9/ 10%

    List the 4 new references (copy and paste is fine):

    a) http://askville.amazon.com/Bluetooth-work/AnswerViewer.do?requestId=7100813
    b) http://www.bluetooth.com/Bluetooth/Technology/Works/Overview_of_Operation.htm
    c) http://www.bluetooth.com/Bluetooth/Technology/Works/
    d) http://electronics.howstuffworks.com/bluetooth1.htm




    3. Glossary of 20 key words = 10%

    Your score = 14/ 20 (copy and paste terms below)


    Bluetooth: a great and new program
    Feature: distinguished
    Hand held devices: helping the program
    Inconvenient cable
    King Harald – the 10th king: who named the Bluetooth
    Long cord
    Loud speaker:
    Magnetic disk:
    Manipulation
    Not disabled: not broke
    Numerous
    Telecommunications: connect away
    Copper: a material used in a Bluetooth
    Glass: a material used in a Bluetooth




    4. Word limits = 30% (Must be e-mailed to Steve)

    500-800 = 5%, 800-1200 = 10%, 1200-1600=20%, 1600-2000 = 30%

    Must not include large block quotes. Only your writing here.

    Your score out of 30 = 10/ 30


    5. Materials section = 40%

    Did you add a materials box = yes
    Did you add Ahmed's 6 questions = yes
    Did you use olive green and tan = yes
    Did you add Richard's section = yes
    Did you start to answer the questions = yes
    Did you use your time to develop this professionally = no

    What grade do you feel it deserves out of 40% = 40/ 40

    total= 80 %

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  11. ak.9May 4, 2009 at 6:55 AM

    Name: Ahmed Khalfan Abdulla
    Date: 4-5-2009

    PAPERS MUST BE YOUR WORK

    For draft 2, you decided that the rubrics would be:

    1. 10 Blogs = 1 pt each = 10% (There were less than 10. Let's go for 5 @ 2 points each)

    Your score: 10/10

    2. 4 additional articles = 10%

    List the 4 new references (copy and paste is fine):

    a) THE FREE DICTIONARY . 1 Jan. 2009 http://www.thefreedictionary.com.
    b) ___________________________
    c) ___________________________
    d) ___________________________



    3. Glossary of 20 key words = 10%

    Your score = 20/ 20 (copy and paste terms below)


    Glossaries 1-10: from (http://www.thefreedictionary.com/) and (Wikipedia)
    Nanotechnology: is the study of the control of matter on an atomic and molecular scale. Generally nanotechnology deals with structures of the size 100 nanometers or smaller, and involves developing materials or devices within that size.
    Carbon Nanotube: Carbon nano tubes are large molecules of pure carbon that are long and thin and shaped like tubes, about 1-3 nanometers (1 nm = 1 billionth of a meter) in diameter, and hundreds to thousands of nanometers long. As individual molecules, nanotubes are 100 times stronger-than-steel and one-sixth its weight.
    Appearance: outward or visible aspect of a person or thing
    Revolution: a drastic and far-reaching change in ways of thinking and behaving
    Synthesis: the process of producing a chemical compound (usually by the union of simpler chemical compounds)
    Destructive: causing destruction or much damage
    Inhaling: Informal to consume rapidly or eagerly
    Allotropes: A structurally differentiated form of an element that exhibits allotropy
    Nanostructure: A nanostructure is an object of intermediate size between molecular and microscopic (micrometer-sized) structures.
    Miniaturization: act of making on a greatly reduced scale











    Glossaries 11-20: from (http://www.thefreedictionary.com/) and (Wikipedia)

    NASA: National Aeronautics and Space Administration: an independent agency of the United States government responsible for aviation.
    Architectures: The term architecture (from Greek αρχιτεκτονική,architektoniki ) can be used to mean a process, a profession or documentation
    Spectrum: A broad sequence or range of related qualities, ideas, or activities
    Reconfigurable: To rearrange the elements or settings of
    Japan’s STA: Science and Technology Administration
    Splitters: a taxonomist who classifies organisms into many groups on the basis of relatively minor characteristics
    Biomedicine: The branch of medical science that deals with the ability of humans to tolerate environmental stresses and variations, as in space travel
    IBM: International Business Machines Corporation
    Molecular: Of or relating to simple or basic structure or form
    STM: short-term memory: what you can repeat immediately after perceiving it



    4. Word limits = 30% (Must be e-mailed to Steve)

    500-800 = 5%, 800-1200 = 10%, 1200-1600=20%, 1600-2000 = 30%

    Must not include large block quotes. Only your writing here.

    Your score out of 30 = 30/ 30


    5. Materials section = 40%

    Did you add a materials box = yes
    Did you add Ahmed's 6 questions = yes
    Did you use olive green and tan = no
    Did you add Richard's section = yes
    Did you start to answer the questions = yes
    Did you use your time to develop this professionally = no

    What grade do you feel it deserves out of 40% = 33/ 40

    TOTAL = 82.5 %

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  12. AamerMay 4, 2009 at 6:55 AM

    Name: Aamer Ahmed

    Date: 3/5/ 2009

    there were some problem connection to internet at 3/5 then I sent it at 4/5/09

    PAPERS MUST BE YOUR WORK

    For draft 2, you decided that the rubrics would be:

    1. 10 Blogs = 1 pt each = 10% (There were less than 10. Let's go for 5 @ 2 points each)

    Your score: 10/ 10

    2. 4 additional articles = 10/10%

    List the 4 new references (copy and paste is fine):

    a)http://www.pencoproducts.com/usr/Catalog%20Downloads/PowderCoat%20Plus%20Flyer.pdf

    b) http://www.bascotecniasteel.com/en/melt-shops.php?gclid=CO-L1qKsnpoCFYM_3god_nJs9g

    c) http://steelguru.com/news/stainless_steel.html

    d) http://www.worldsteel.org/

    e) http://www.ec.gc.ca/cleanair-
    airpur/Pollution_Sources/Iron_and_Steel-WSB1BEEFD9-1_En.htm








    3. Glossary of 20 key words = 10%

    Your score = 10/ 20 (copy and paste terms below)
    Your score = 20/ 20 (copy and paste terms below)
    Glossary

    1. Steel الصُلب أو الفولاذ

    2. Glider شراعية

    3. Propulsion الدفع

    4. Airships المناطيد

    5. Drag المقاومة

    6. Weight الوزن

    7. Thrust قوة الدفع

    8. Wings الجناحات

    9. Mechanical flightالطيران الميكانيكي
    10. Atmosphere الغلاف الجوي

    11. Lift of aircraft قوة الرفع

    12. Roll اللفة

    13. Rudder الدفة

    14. Fuselages هياكل الطائرات

    15. Beams الأشعّة

    16. Stability الإستقرار

    17. Composites المركّبات

    18. jet engine المحرك النفّاث

    19. science العلم

    20. strength القوّة




    4. Word limits = 30/30% (Must be e-mailed to Steve)

    500-800 = 5%, 800-1200 = 10%, 1200-1600=20%, 1600-2000 = 30%

    Must not include large block quotes. Only your writing here.

    Your score out of 30 = 29/ 30


    5. Materials section = 40%

    Did you add a materials box = yes
    Did you add Ahmed's 6 questions = yes
    Did you use olive green and tan = yes
    Did you add Richard's section = not required to me but I will do it.
    Did you start to answer the questions = yes
    Did you use your time to develop this professionally = yes

    What grade do you feel it deserves out of 40% = 39

    TOTAL = 97 %

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  13. OmarMay 4, 2009 at 7:08 AM

    Hi,

    Name: Omar Abdullah Al Shemaili

    Date: Monday, May 04, 2009

    PAPERS MUST BE YOUR WORK

    For draft 2, you decided that the rubrics would be:

    1. 10 Blogs = 1 pt each = 10% (There were less than 10. Let's go for 5 @ 2 points each)

    Your score: 10 / 10

    2. 4 additional articles = 10%

    List the 4 new references (copy and paste is fine):

    a) Copper.org/environment
    b) Rameria.com/inglese/history.html
    c) Actionrecyclingcenter.com
    d) Wiki.answers.com


    3. Glossary of 20 key words = 10%

    Your score = 20 / 20 (copy and paste terms below)
    Global Positioning System
    Tracking
    Copper
    Mapping
    Triangulating
    Satellite
    Navigation
    Space Segment
    User Segment
    Control Segment
    Polymers
    Thermoplastics
    Alloy
    Composites
    Thermosets
    Hemisphere
    Orion
    Compass
    Accurate
    Accuracy


    4. Word limits = 30% (Must be e-mailed to Steve)

    500-800 = 5%, 800-1200 = 10%, 1200-1600=20%, 1600-2000 = 30%

    Must not include large block quotes. Only your writing here.

    Your score out of 30 = 30 / 30


    5. Materials section = 40%

    Did you add a materials box = Yes
    Did you add Ahmed's 6 questions = Yes
    Did you use olive green and tan = Yes
    Did you add Richard's section = Yes
    Did you start to answer the questions = Yes
    Did you use your time to develop this professionally = Yes

    What grade do you feel it deserves out of 40% = 40 / 40

    TOTAL = 98 %

    Thanks a lot...

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  14. AbdullaMay 4, 2009 at 7:19 AM

    Name: Abdulla
    Date: May 4th 2009

    PAPERS MUST BE YOUR WORK

    For draft 2, you decided that the rubrics would be:

    1. 10 Blogs = 1 pt each = 10% (There were less than 10. Let's go for 5 @ 2 points each)

    Your score: 7/ 10

    2. 4 additional articles = 10%

    List the 4 new references (copy and paste is fine):

    a) http://inventors.about.com/od/gstartinventions/a/glass.htm 2009-04-23

    b) http://www.glassonline.com/infoserv/history.html 2009-04-23

    c) http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Glass 2009-04-23

    d) http://www.kinsalecrystal.ie/history.htm 2009-04-23




    3. Glossary of 20 key words = 10%

    Your score = 6/ 20 (copy and paste terms below)

    Launched
    Fancier
    inorganic
    containers
    toxic
    vases




    4. Word limits = 30% (Must be e-mailed to Steve)

    500-800 = 5%, 800-1200 = 10%, 1200-1600=20%, 1600-2000 = 30%

    Must not include large block quotes. Only your writing here.

    Your score out of 30 = 10/ 30


    5. Materials section = 40%

    Did you add a materials box = yes
    Did you add Ahmed's 6 questions = yes
    Did you use olive green and tan = yes
    Did you add Richard's section = yes
    Did you start to answer the questions = yes
    Did you use your time to develop this professionally = yes

    What grade do you feel it deserves out of 40% = 38/ 40

    TOTAL = 89 %

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  15. Abdullah AlshehhiMay 5, 2009 at 8:46 AM

    Name: Abdullah Ahmed Allay

    Date: 5-5-2009

    PAPERS MUST BE YOUR WORK

    For draft 2, you decided that the rubrics would be:

    1. 10 Blogs = 1 pt each = 10% (There were less than 10. Let's go for 5 @ 2 points each)

    Your score10/10

    2. 4 additional articles = 10%

    List the 4 new references (copy and paste is fine):

    a) http://www.dancewithshadows.com/business/pharma/plastic.asp
    b) http://inventors.about.com/od/pstartinventions/a/plastics.htm
    c) http://www.discoverhover.org/abouthovercraft/history.htm
    d) http://www.gizmohighway.com/history/hovercraft.htm




    3. Glossary of 20 key words = 10%
    Your score = 20/ 20 (copy and paste terms below)

    Glossary
    Assembly
    Brittle
    Chamber
    Combination
    Cushion
    Efficient
    Envelope
    Flexible
    Flexible skirt
    Hovercraft
    Maintain
    Philosopher
    Plastic
    Rubber
    Sea Transport
    hovercrafts.
    Sensitive
    Stiff
    Sufficient
    Unbolted

    4. Word limits = 30% (Must be e-mailed to Steve)

    1200-1600=20%
    Must not include large block quotes. Only your writing here.

    Your score out of 30 = 20/30


    5. Materials section = 40%

    Did you add a materials box = yes
    Did you add Ahmed's 6 questions = yes
    Did you use olive green and tan = yes
    Did you add Richard's section = yes
    Did you start to answer the questions = yes
    Did you use your time to develop this professionally = no

    What grade do you feel it deserves out of 40% =36/40

    TOTAL = 85 %

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  16. Stephen PellerineMay 6, 2009 at 2:21 AM

    Since one of the main focuses of this draft was the materials section and 15/15 reported very good grades - Ahmed is able to ask for this section by the end of next week?

    We will give others class time if needed to develop this. If you need it yourself - please use it.

    Cheers

    Steve

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  17. MohammedMay 6, 2009 at 5:33 AM

    Name: mohammed Almatrooshi _____________

    Date: _______________ 2009

    PAPERS MUST BE YOUR WORK

    For draft 2, you decided that the rubrics would be:

    1. 10 Blogs = 1 pt each = 10% (There were less than 10. Let's go for 5 @ 2 points each)

    Your score: ___8__ 10

    2. 4 additional articles = 10%

    List the 4 new references (copy and paste is fine):

    a) http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Plastic

    b) http://environment.about.com/od/earthtalkcolumns/a/recycleplastics.htm

    c) http://www.smh.com.au/news/environment/the-plastic-killing-fields/2007/12/28/1198778702627.html?page=fullpage

    d) http://www.bestlifeonline.com/cms/publish/health/Our_oceans_are_turning_into_plastic_are_we_2.php




    3. Glossary of 20 key words = 10%

    Your score = __16___ 20 (copy and paste terms below)





    4. Word limits = 30% (Must be e-mailed to Steve)

    500-800 = 5%, 800-1200 = 10%, 1200-1600=20%, 1600-2000 = 30%

    Must not include large block quotes. Only your writing here.

    Your score out of 30 = __30___ 30


    5. Materials section = 40%

    Did you add a materials box = yes
    Did you add Ahmed's 6 questions = yes
    Did you use olive green and tan = yes
    Did you add Richard's section = yes
    Did you start to answer the questions = yes
    Did you use your time to develop this professionally = no

    What grade do you feel it deserves out of 40% = ___30__ 40

    TOTAL = ___94__ %

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  18. hasanMay 10, 2009 at 6:13 AM

    Name: __HASAN AHMED_______________________________

    Date: ___10/5/____________ 2009

    PAPERS MUST BE YOUR WORK

    For draft 2, you decided that the rubrics would be:

    1. 10 Blogs = 1 pt each = 10% (There were less than 10. Let's go for 5 @ 2 points each)

    Your score: __4___ 10

    2. 4 additional articles = 0

    List the 4 new references (copy and paste is fine):

    a) ___________________________
    b) ___________________________
    c) ___________________________
    d) ___________________________



    3. Glossary of 20 key words = 10%

    Your score = __10___ 20 (copy and paste terms below)

    accessories
    automation
    behavior
    construct
    converting
    demonstrated
    Domestic robot
    estimated
    exhibition
    ferrofluids
    flexible
    humanoid robot
    intervention
    muscles
    navigate
    productivity
    programmable
    undesirable
    Virtual





    4. Word limits = 30% (Must be e-mailed to Steve)

    500-800 = 5%, 800-1200 = 10%, 1200-1600=20%, 1600-2000 = 30%

    Must not include large block quotes. Only your writing here.

    Your score out of 30 = 30


    5. Materials section = 40%

    Did you add a materials box = yes
    Did you add Ahmed's 6 questions = no
    Did you use olive green and tan = yes
    Did you add Richard's section = no
    Did you start to answer the questions = yes
    Did you use your time to develop this professionally = yes

    What grade do you feel it deserves out of 40% = __30___ 40

    TOTAL = _74____ %

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  19. sea eyesMay 16, 2009 at 12:47 PM

    1. Name: Mohamed Ali Al Khawwar

    Date: 16/5/ 2009

    PAPERS MUST BE YOUR WORK

    For draft 2, you decided that the rubrics would be:

    1. 10 Blogs = 1 pt each = 10% (There were less than 10. Let's go for 5 @ 2 points each)

    Your score: 10/10
    2. 4 additional articles = 10%

    List the 4 new references (copy and paste is fine):

    a) http://www.enviroliteracy.org/article.php/1013.html
    b) http://www.springerlink.com/content/7672445j3384g7r1/
    c) http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Aluminium
    d) http://earth911.com/metal/aluminum-can/



    3. Glossary of 20 key words = 10%

    Your score =20/20 (copy and paste terms below)
    Seek: to try to find or to get something.
    2. Innovation: a new idea or method
    3. Entertainment: shows, films, television, or other performances or activities that entertain people.
    4. Various: many different.
    5. Display: to show
    6. Resolution: when something separates or is separated into clearly different parts.
    7. Track: mark
    8. Conveniently: suitable for your purposes and needs and causing the least difficulty
    9. Warp: bend
    10. Applications: an official request
    11. Functions: the duty of something
    12. Capture: to represent or describe something very accurately using words or images
    13. Formats: to organize
    14. Aluminum: a light metallic element which is silver in color and used especially for making cooking equipment and aircraft parts
    15. Tunes: musical notes
    16. GPS: global positioning system
    17. Properties: a quality in a substance or material, especially one which means that it can be used in a particular way
    18. Ductile: describes metals that can be bent easily
    19. Apex: the highest point or top of a shape or object
    20. Symbol: a sign, shape or object which is used to represent something else





    4. Word limits = 30% (Must be e-mailed to Steve)

    500-800 = 5%, 800-1200 = 10%, 1200-1600=20%, 1600-2000 = 30%

    Must not include large block quotes. Only your writing here. 1644 words

    Your score out of 30 =30/ 30


    5. Materials section = 40%

    Did you add a materials box = yes
    Did you add Ahmed's 6 questions = yes
    Did you use olive green and tan = yes
    Did you add Richard's section = yes
    Did you start to answer the questions = yes (but not all of them)
    Did you use your time to develop this professionally = yes

    What grade do you feel it deserves out of 40% = 37/ 40

    TOTAL = ___92__ %

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  20. Stephen PellerineMay 17, 2009 at 4:56 AM

    Mohamed Ali Al Khawwar

    Great - what about being over two weeks late?

    ReplyDelete
  21. AMMAR ALSHEHHIMay 18, 2009 at 7:33 AM

    Name :AMMAR ALSHEHHI

    Date: 18/5/2009

    PAPERS MUST BE YOUR WORK

    For draft 2, you decided that the rubrics would be:

    1. 10 Blogs = 1 pt each = 10% (There were less than 10. Let's go for 5 @ 2 points each)

    Your score: 10

    2. 4 additional articles = 10%

    List the 4 new references (copy and paste is fine):

    a) http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Aluminium_recycling

    b) http://209.85.229.132/search?q=cache:3g9gbCiuZRUJ:www.ehow.com/how-does_4596541_recycling-aluminum-cans-help-environment.html+discarding+the+aluminum&cd=1&hl=ar&ct=clnk&gl=ae

    c) http://earth911.com/metal/aluminum-can/benefits-of-aluminum-can-recycling/

    d) http://www.uaeinteract.com/docs/Dubal_to_increase_aluminium_production/34987.htm




    3. Glossary of 20 key words = 10%

    Your score = _____ 20 (copy and paste terms below)

    I still work on it sir when I finish my draft I will put may glossary





    4. Word limits = 30% (Must be e-mailed to Steve)

    500-800 = 5%, 800-1200 = 10%, 1200-1600=20%, 1600-2000 = 30%
    30%

    Must not include large block quotes. Only your writing here.

    Your score out of 30 = 30 30


    5. Materials section = 40%

    Did you add a materials box = yes
    Did you add Ahmed's 6 questions = yes
    Did you use olive green and tan = yes
    Did you add Richard's section = yes
    Did you start to answer the questions = yes
    Did you use your time to develop this professionally = yes

    What grade do you feel it deserves out of 40% = 40

    TOTAL = _____ %

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